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[WIP] Yumiko (Character) - feedback needed, please!

Lucasthyel
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Hey guys,

I've been doing this character over the past two weeks, very slow progress since it's my second character in ZBrush, and I don't really know to which direction I should go from this point (or where I should improve). Any feedback will be greatly appreciated, thanks!
The concept is Yumiko from Aleksey Bayura (https://www.artstation.com/artwork/3L2dY)


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  • PolyHertz
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    PolyHertz polycount lvl 666
    Overall it looks to be coming along well. But the head seems a bit squished, and the shape of the nose/nostrils a bit odd. Also keep in mind that the ears antihelix should be folded over the underlying cartilidge and not just come directly outwards.
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    PolyHertz said:
    Overall it looks to be coming along well. But the head seems a bit squished, and the shape of the nose/nostrils a bit odd. Also keep in mind that the ears antihelix should be folded over the underlying cartilidge and not just come directly outwards.
    Thanks, I'll make sure to revisit these areas!
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