Finished my first small environment that was heavily zBrush based - looking for critique!
polycounter lvl 3
So i've always been novice at zBrush but with this project I decided I wanted to make something that needed to be sculpted fully zBrush. I'm looking for critique if possible so I can improve on my next project! thanks!
More Images here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/RYyLVO
More Images here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/RYyLVO
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This one's a better angle, but I'd say bring the camera down a notch. There's a ton of black space in the back. If I were to look at a wall or something away from the screen, and look at the image right after, the first thing my eye goes is on the center, in between the black background and the corner of the ring. Since the is mostly focused on your props, have the angle focus more on that, and maybe leave 1/3 or 1/4 of the space for the background. I hope that makes sense.
The water splotches on the cup/bottle, make sure they make sense dripping down, where they are. If you'd like, you can probably try and have those drips pop out more from the light.
If you want to add more final touches, I'd say add some detail on the floor. It's too clean. I think there are some folds on the floor, from the Boxers moving around a lot. Maybe add a simple stool in the back corner (something simple, just for visual purposes). Wet water marks on the floor. Could be from the coaches pouring water on their head and the water drips down, by the corner.
I hope this helps. This is making me want to watch Boxing some more. Good work, though, being a novice in ZBrush. Nice job.