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While I'm still fighting with the pose and the environment I've decided to drop this here for you to take a small peek.
In the past 2 months I've worked on this character(Clementine from Westworld). I wanted to see if I can make this really complex hairstyle and clothes. The whole process was streamed on my twitch:  https://www.twitch.tv/nimlot26 
If you wanna check a marmoset viewer file you can find on my artstation: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/2xq4Xv
I hope you'll like it.



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  • evillair
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    evillair polycounter lvl 17
    Hi, this looks great, the only issue I can see is the face looks too far forward to me, everything else is spot on. Good job!

    Here's an image of a quick edit in photoshop to show you what I mean, the white line is you silhouette as of right now, I just pushed it back a bit.


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    evillair said:
    Hi, this looks great, the only issue I can see is the face looks too far forward to me, everything else is spot on. Good job!

    Here's an image of a quick edit in photoshop to show you what I mean, the white line is you silhouette as of right now, I just pushed it back a bit.

    Thanks for trying to help but you're wrong. You get fooled by the whole volume of hair on the back. The face is as forward as should be. Now that I'm looking at this picture I see that I might have moved her chin a bit upwards but other than that the proportions are there.


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  • evillair
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    That's an odd angle with her head turned.

    This is a nice shot of her sideways.

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  • nimlot26
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    evillair said:
    That's an odd angle with her head turned.

    This is a nice shot of her sideways.

    Not really. That's a weird shot. I have it too in my reference folder but it's not working with the rest of them. Weird lens or something.
    I used this pack of images to sculpt her since they're all taken with the same camera and easier to make the proportions.


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  • Justo
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    I don't know the real actress similarity nor seen the show and character, but I wanted to say good friggin job on that hair dude. It's been a long time since I saw realtime hair like this and said out loud Damn haha.  
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  • littleclaude
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    Man that hair!!! I am biting the back of my knuckles :) Great job on the skin as well. Thanks for the break down. Double thumbs up.

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    Dude, this is such beautiful work, totally inspires me! You used Marvelous Designer for the clothes? I'd love to lean how you retopologized the drapery. Excellent work!
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  • Vexod14
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    There is something that does not work on her face, maybe it comes from her look, fantastic work anyway (I guess straight look is here for rigging purpose mostly)
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  • Alex_J
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    I think what is weird about her face is just that the real life actress has a weird face. I don't mean that in a negative way, I just mean she's pretty unique. Which, IMO, is a good thing. You want characters who catch you eye and hold your attention.

    Anyway, well done again and thanks for sharing the process on twitch. I'll be sure to check it out soon.

    By the way, the detail on the hair is so fine. Is that with only a 4k map?
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    amandell said:
    Dude, this is such beautiful work, totally inspires me! You used Marvelous Designer for the clothes? I'd love to lean how you retopologized the drapery. Excellent work!
    Yes. The clothes were made in marvelous. If you're a subscriber you can check see the whole process. All the broadcasts were saved.
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    BIGTIMEMASTER said:
    I think what is weird about her face is just that the real life actress has a weird face. I don't mean that in a negative way, I just mean she's pretty unique. Which, IMO, is a good thing. You want characters who catch you eye and hold your attention.

    Anyway, well done again and thanks for sharing the process on twitch. I'll be sure to check it out soon.

    By the way, the detail on the hair is so fine. Is that with only a 4k map?
    The hair actually has a 2k map.
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  • o0_themilkybarkid_0o
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    Oh hey, I didn't know you were on Polycount too! I just listened to your interview with Ryan Kingslien, really inspiring stuff. This model is gorgeous looking! The hair is just phenomenal, I'd love to learn how to do that!  
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  • Blouko
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    This comment is probably unnecessary, but I'm 300% sure this is not a T-Pose, but an A-Pose. Anyways, great work it looks beautiful! :smile:
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    That Hair THough!!!! This is crazy good. Dude, if 3D wont work out for you :D you can always become a hairdresser :).. Awsome work!
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  • DigitalCraze
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    Bravo! <3 She was my favorite. 
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  • nimlot26
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    o0_themilkybarkid_0o said:
    Oh hey, I didn't know you were on Polycount too! I just listened to your interview with Ryan Kingslien, really inspiring stuff. This model is gorgeous looking! The hair is just phenomenal, I'd love to learn how to do that!  
    Thanks. I'm streaming all day long from Monday to Friday so you can join anytime or just take a look at the saved videos on my twitch..tho for that you need to be a subscriber.
    Blouko said:
    This comment is probably unnecessary, but I'm 300% sure this is not a T-Pose, but an A-Pose. Anyways, great work it looks beautiful! :smile:
    Indeed it is an A pose but generically people are calling the poses ready for rigging T-pose...bad habit I guess.
    AlexJerjomin said:
    That Hair THough!!!! This is crazy good. Dude, if 3D wont work out for you :D you can always become a hairdresser :).. Awsome work!
    Yeah. I know...also I can become a tailor giving how many clothes I had to do in the past few years. :neutral:
    DigitalCraze said:
    Bravo! <3 She was my favorite. 
    Thanks
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  • nimlot26
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    Some final pose and scene images.


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