[UE4] Need feedbacks

Gaafah · Oct 2018

Hey there ! I'm a junior level artist at Ubisoft and I'm working on a personal scene to improve and try new workflows. I could use an outside view on my project to make it better ! I'll post here the WIP

Here's the base concept art from Igor Piwowarczyk :

And here's the current state of my scene :

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/kl/qcvppswtn7vg.jpg

PS : i'm streaming the creation of the scene some times here

Gaafah · Oct 2018

Small update on the lighting (don't

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/lf/to9wstr28ncp.png

pay attention to the carpet and the fucked up Ambient occlusion) :

7bajwa · Oct 2018

Looking Good @Gaafah

the only thing right now I feel is those wrinkles. Those are really big. look at the concept as those are very subtle and have some variation.
Subtle them down or someone might stumble and fall.

Gaafah · Oct 2018

@7bajwa True ! I never used Marvellous before i had too much fun on it haha ! Thx for the advice

Gaafah · Oct 2018

Last update for the day !

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/rn/w1l20lpphwn7.png

Alex_J · Oct 2018

I don't know enough about the environment artist work -- so forgive me if this comment is simply made too early to be useful -- but there seems to be a difference in the field of view that changes how the scene feels to me. Compared to the concept, your image has *seems to have* a wider FOV, which makes the viewer feel further away -- makes the scene feel less up-clsoe and intimate to me. I dunno, could just be a more cinematic crop in the reference. Anyway, cool scene. Will follow your progress.

Gaafah · Oct 2018

@BIGTIMEMASTER Hey ! Your comment is PERFECTLY accurate. I'm totally struggling with that since the beginning ! It's a bit wider indeed but not by far. I'll try to adjust it more thank you ! Thanks for your attention

Gaafah · Oct 2018

Here's an update of the project ! I worked on the camera FOV and the lighting/post processing. I'm almost done with the mood !!

I still got a few props to make and we'll be good

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/2a/dq443y64cr9w.png

Gaafah · Oct 2018

Here's the final renders !!!

[UE4] Need feedbacks

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