Looks fun! As for story wise I was wondering why he is running from <--- to ---> and then going <---, I think it would of been better coming from -----> to <--- and with the momentum it has to launch his body at you have it right now. But it's just an opinion , its not wrong !
When he lands the hook into the rope it would be cool to have some "hit" movement on the camera to sell that action,
After he kicks the guy , the rifle looks strange going that fast from his hands :P Like if another external force it's pulling the gun.
For the yellow guy after he kicks, his chest is always looking forward, it would be cool to add a little bit of rotation when he lands and then finish like you have it right now
For the camera, after he kicks I think it could look better if it don't stop, I find it a little strange , maybe a shake or easy in/out but not a complete stop
https://youtu.be/oe_RoVxs0Yg
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As for story wise I was wondering why he is running from <--- to ---> and then going <---, I think it would of been better coming from -----> to <--- and with the momentum it has to launch his body at you have it right now. But it's just an opinion , its not wrong
When he lands the hook into the rope it would be cool to have some "hit" movement on the camera to sell that action,
After he kicks the guy , the rifle looks strange going that fast from his hands :P Like if another external force it's pulling the gun.
For the yellow guy after he kicks, his chest is always looking forward, it would be cool to add a little bit of rotation when he lands and then finish like you have it right now
For the camera, after he kicks I think it could look better if it don't stop, I find it a little strange , maybe a shake or easy in/out but not a complete stop
Hope it helps , looking really fun!