opening scene of an animation i'm working on

aesir · Jun 2017

I think this is the best paint I've made yet! It's not perfect, but it's miles above where I was last year. I hope you guys like it!

EVF · Jun 2017

really nice indeed!
you could push slightly darker values in the tree trunk and fg leaves.
It made me think of the secret life of pets

lotet · Jun 2017

Its beautifull, love it!
Id say maybe some of the detail on the big tree and roots could be a bit more stylized.

aesir · Jun 2017

Thanks for the notes! I'll take another pass on it and see if I can push it a bit further.

aesir · Aug 2017

Hey, I finally made that animation!

It's my interpretation of a Charles Bukowski poem about my favorite vice: comparing myself to other people.

lotet · Aug 2017

beautiful, dont got much else to say

Fris · Aug 2017

Awesome job man! One thing i could say to pay attention to is the focal points in the picture, my eye keeps going to the tree when its sapose to go to the guy sitting down, this can be fixed by using the rule of 3rds, here i made a quick notes and edits to show you what i mean hope this helps

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/0l/3b7t5zdi2maf.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/f3/ii2lxja5k86o.jpg

aesir · Aug 2017

That's a great point and thank you for the overlay sketch!

Honestly storyboards and layouts have always been a weakness. I'm getting better, but definitely not there yet.

opening scene of an animation i'm working on

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