[Critiques Needed] Silmeria Valkyrie

Horn · Sep 2016

Some further progress with my high res Zbrush project on Silmeria who's a character from Valkyrie Profile 2.
Please let me know what you think so far and how I can approve,
Thanks!

First up the concept:

My Work:

Horn · Sep 2016

More work. I adjusted the the shoulder plates with a new base mesh, pinched the edges of the skirt, added in the sword, and did some more stuff to the fibermesh hair

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/fr/0c5zajf2fnns.jpg

Horn · Sep 2016

Getting closer to the end preparing to pose my model in zbrush. Any tips/helpful criticism on my work will be much appreciated.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/ia/70nt2g71h48t.jpg

Tomtegubbe · Sep 2016

I feel that her arms face and hands need some more work. Reference will help:
https://www.3d.sk/photos/search/query//thumb/small/standard/1/premium/1/category-5/21-30/category-115/Woman/category-145/White/category-169/Nude/page/1

PyrZern · Sep 2016

You might want to post just the naked body first. If the body doesn't look right, putting armors on top isn't gonna fix it.

might as well hide her hair too. I think there's something going on with her face. And her lips and chin are not helping you either.

Image: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/ed/98/8b/ed988b9c66c19be460f1e8043ba92726.jpg

Horn · Sep 2016

Here is the portrait from different angles. The only thing I've adjusted since you commented was elongating the lips a bit and pointing the chin some more. My facial reference is of Candice Swanepoel: https://www.google.com/search?q=Candice+Swanepoel&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi88cWF6LDPAhWTix4KHeM7CMYQ_AUICCgB&biw=1534&bih=790

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/mt/tcbbhax9vkup.jpg

And here is the body:

[Critiques Needed] Silmeria Valkyrie

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