Outskirts House

zakioz · Nov 2015

Hello, I'm currently a student looking for any type of feedback or critique on my project.

The main story behind my scene is based on another scene that I made about a guy that won the lottery and bought a nice house and a car. This scene is about how after he blew through all of his money and now he has to live in this house. I want to add a bit more to the scene to populate it more by the end of the year.

Again, any feedback or critique about this scene is greatly appreciated.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/jf/obuiv3zkqgok.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/r4/euliok3mek6g.jpg

zakioz · Nov 2015

These are the updated renders of what I have so far for my overall scene that I created in Maya and substance painter to texture, then rendered out in mental ray. Again, any critique or feedback would be greatly helpful.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/ni/lyana7w3i6dx.jpg

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/br/w7iuctdxa8gu.jpg

JoshWilkinson · Nov 2015

That character desperate need of any sort of realistic anatomy. Or ditch him altogether.

zakioz · Nov 2015

@BringMeASunkist thank you for your feedback. I am in no way a character artist and I shouldn't have used a stylized character reference to create it. I may change the camera angle on the second render to an over the shoulder one as he's looking at a photo of the old house or just ultimately scrape him. Thanks again.

Outskirts House

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