First environment piece
polycounter lvl 4
Hi Folks
I'm new here and i want to share with you my first environment piece. Its a remake of an old tutorial of Tor Frick i did in Unreal4. I hope you like it.
/Jan
I'm new here and i want to share with you my first environment piece. Its a remake of an old tutorial of Tor Frick i did in Unreal4. I hope you like it.
/Jan
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The photographic style and framing is top-notch. Love the depth and the lens effects, just the right amount.
The biggest thing that sticks out to me is lighting. The contrast is fairly aggressive, so while it's very striking, you don't get a good look at a lot of your nice props in the shadows. All of the shelves and benches along the outer walls are getting lost. The best-illuminated area on the floorspace is an empty patch of concrete. Your eye is getting draw there, why's it empty! You could consider adding some kind of hero prop there. I'd get some kind of prop or clutter in there to break up that space at the very least.
Speaking of density, you seem to have done a great job of getting some large and mid-sized shapes in there with the shelves and pipes, but you could use another pass with some more dense details. I'd start by filling up those shelves with some smaller props, to get some richer depth to the clutter. Also, an abandoned space like this would probably have accumulated a lot of debris by now as bits of the walls and ceiling flake and fall off onto the ground- which is very clean at the moment.
/Jan
Got some time to start blocking out the Engine for my hero prop:
Can't wait to see it when it's done. Or how you would even go about LP'ing this. So many little shapes!