GDC T-Shirt Contest - NBLM - Roadtrip

NBLM · Jan 2015

Hello, I also wanted to give this a try, so here is my T-shirt ( WIP)

KBcreator13 · Jan 2015

Hey man add a second color the the VW bus kind how they are in real life! and it would give the shirt some pop the plain green is overwhelming!

NBLM · Jan 2015

Okay I added some orange, I hope it's better now. I'm not really good with colours.

whatever · Jan 2015

Keep marmoset in orginal color (white or grey) and gdc do it white ,my personal opnion

CandyStripes05 · Jan 2015

whatever wrote: »

Keep marmoset in orginal color (white or grey) and gdc do it white ,my personal opnion

+1

do marmoset in grey, and change all the orange to white

sometimes simple is better, the orange and green don't go well together imo

NBLM · Jan 2015

Thx guys for the feedback. Unfortunately it's not allowed to use more than 3 colours and I have already maxed it out, but I can change the orange to white.

Freud · Jan 2015

I love the new Green and White one. The back design is still a bit too big, for my taste, but overall i really enjoy your T-Shirt.

whatever · Jan 2015

Iagree on the size of the back,and I think you can use the default grey marmoset cuz its a darker white

NBLM · Jan 2015

Thanks guys! I have revised the back based on your feedback, I reduced the size and put the marmoset and polycount logo on the front side. I also made one where the logos are at the bottom of the back side. Dunno what looks better.

CandyStripes05 · Jan 2015

keep the names on the back, if you put them up at the top I would put polycount on top of marmoset just so it's white green white, I also like them on the bottom

whatever · Jan 2015

I would like to see first one but with addon from candystripes05,go with not that big polycount than marmoset on the top back

NBLM · Jan 2015

I guess that's my last revision, deadline is almost there. I've put the logos back at the top an rearranged them. Those two are my final designs now:

With the logos at the top of the back side:

And with the logos at the bottom of the back side:

(Dear Judges: If I can't post two then I go with the first one. )

Thanks to all of you for your help, it now looks way better than before.:)
And good luck to all other artists!

CandyStripes05 · Jan 2015

well done !

GDC T-Shirt Contest - NBLM - Roadtrip

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