Character Model, Would Like Feedback
So here is my second character model, admittedly it still has some work that needs to get done but I wanted to post some progress on it and get some outside opinions on how to improve it. The concept is a robotic cowboy who has seen better times but still maintains the personality of when he was first made. I created this in a combination of Maya and Zbrush, mainly used maya to model and create most of it and used Zbrush for the detailing and whatnot. Would really enjoy some feedback from you guys.
Polycount: 18,834
VertCount: 18,901
Rendered in Mental Ray
Utilized Diffuse, Specular, and Normal Maps
Sincerely,
Logan Shepard
Polycount: 18,834
VertCount: 18,901
Rendered in Mental Ray
Utilized Diffuse, Specular, and Normal Maps
Sincerely,
Logan Shepard
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==Concept==
I'm finding the design busy, and this speaks to the final 3D model as well.
The only thing about the silhouette of this character that speaks cowboy is the hat. But it feels out of place as the rest of the robot's body doesn't speak to a cowboy role.
What I would recommend on the concept front is to sit down again, research 1607 1912 American Frontier (and Mexican, Brazilian, etc) cowboy wear and farming equipment, gather references of both cowboy gard and Industrial Age equipment, and create a crazy number (like a minimum of 50) thumbnail sketches, focusing only on the silhouette, of this character.
In games, first reads are priority. Some games have different leeways, but there's good reasons why games like Starcraft 2, even if players are zipping across their screen incredibly fast, on-screen character are individuall distinguishable by their sikhouettes. This holds true for most game-art.
Focus on a good silhouette that read clearly, and a huge chunk of your design is taken care of.
==3D==
As stated above, the read across the materials are too uniform, my eyes aren't drawn immediately to one particular area. I'd recommend isolating the internal glow to the chest or the head. Vary where and how the metal wear and tear is. His hands, for example, are probably more worn down than his abs (when would a robot really sit that frequently)?
My eyes have a very hard time finding a focal point on the character model. Make one.
Also, render in a real-time renderer if this is a game asset. Mental Ray does not render in real time the way Unity or Unreal Engine 4 does. What better proof of "This works in engine" if it's popped into a game engine or a realtime renderer?
If you aren't capable of designing something that fits the image in your head or the vision you had for you model, find another artist that can. Work with a concept artist and model what they draw for you. This is very important for a couple reasons, the first being that in the industry, that's the way it works. A character artist does not make things up and put them in the game. Character designs are created through several iterations from the concept team and then given to the modelers. The second reason to work this way is that when your portfolio is being review, if the reviewer does not like the idea of your model, the concept, they will have a negative taste in their mouths before they even look at what you did in terms of polygonal layout, UV space and textures.
If you are absolutely hell bent on doing your own concepts, then do a ton of them. Keep drawing and sketching until the idea gets fleshed out to a point that the design is near perfect. The more time you spend designing, the easier the model is to create.
In terms of what you created modeling wise, keep at it. You seem to have a good understanding of the basics, it's just too hard to critic the model itself because I can't get past the design. Don't get discouraged, just keep at it.