Repair tool

Digitalair · Jul 2014

High poly version of the repair tool for the upcoming game entitled Liberico.

Alternative render:

Concept:

Any CC is welcomed.

Links:
Enraged entertainment- http://enraged-games.com/EE/#
Facebook page- https://www.facebook.com/EnragedEntertainment

Digitalair · Jul 2014

bump

derugin.s · Jul 2014

looks good

Deathstick · Jul 2014

It's a little strange how you went insane on the smoothing with the handle and then gave only 4 edgeloops for the top of the wrench.

I realize how that's what it looks like in the concept but the concept itself seems to have too much edge pinching on the left hook. The smooth curvy bulgyness of the handle is fighting the lowpoly rigidness of the top and I think it would help a lot with the piece if that transition was revisited.

Joost · Jul 2014

That's a really bad render for showing off a model.

Please consider using a dark diffuse with moderate spec and gloss.

From what I can see it looks pretty good.

JackNelson · Jul 2014

From the concept, it looks like the inside of the right hook (the one which remains stationary) is too round.

I'm assuming the tool would be to tighten bolts that are of of a hexagonal shape, so you'd need the "rigidness" to give that impression. Aside from that it looks okay.

Digitalair · Jul 2014

Thanks everyone for the feedback, I'll work on the model this evening. Added a viewport screenshot in the OP that shows op the handle better.

Digitalair · Jul 2014

bump for more cc

Joost · Jul 2014

That looks better. My main critique that I didn't mention earlier is that it just doesn't feel like scifi. It just looks like some gimmicky tool that you could buy today. When I think of a scifi repair tool I imagine lasers and moving parts. At least some kind of power tool. Not a glorified wrench. That's just my opinion though.

Not a repair tool per se, but this is the sort of look I'd expect. Depends on how scifi you want to go though.

Repair tool

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