Subtle 1rony's Foliage Scenery

Subtle 1rony · Dec 2013

Hey guys I just wanted to show what I've been working on for school. I'm in a class that is focused on learning and implementing different types of modular workflows for consistency and efficiency in design. I constructed a foliage kit and a terrain blending shader that was used to build this scene.

I am interested in comments/critiques/methods to help it improve. Thanks

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I feel I should give credit to Damian Lazarski and his foliage tutorials, as they really provided the base of knowledge for me to get started on making foliage.

Megacorpse · Dec 2013

It looks nice but the emptiness of your horizon line quickly catches the eye.

locater16 · Dec 2013

Megacorpse wrote: »

It looks nice but the emptiness of your horizon line quickly catches the eye.

The blue fog is comin for ye! :poly142:

Definitely needs extension. Good work on the foreground though :thumbup:

.Wiki · Dec 2013

A simple environment cube with some hills and distant mountains could break up the horizon line

DWalker · Dec 2013

The box coming out of the foreground tree seems really out of place.

I'd cut back the foliage in the center of the road, and possibly increase the depth of the ruts on the side.

Subtle 1rony · Jan 2014

Hello, I wanted to show some extra work I did on this scene as well as thank the people who commented for their feedback; it was certainly helpful! I tried to resolve the immediate horizon problem. Let me know what you think

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RJE95 · Jan 2014

I think it looks great

but 2 things caught my eye apart from the things mentioned. In the first picture the fence seems small compared to the size of a car that goes down that road (by the distance between the wheel tracks). This could just be me that thinks this though. The other things is in the second picture, there seems to be a branch from the log that cuts right through one of the fence rails. See what I mean?

Subtle 1rony's Foliage Scenery

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