Hi there! I think the best way to get feedback is to actually post your work while it's in progress, step by step. I see issues with the model (areas of connection, smoothing group errors, pieces that would benefit from some thickness, etc.), issues with the textures (mostly they just need some more work and refining - edge wear, grunge pass, material definition), and issues with presentation (lighting and background).
But that is always too much for people to try and critique at once, so it will be more helpful to everyone (and especially to you!) if you take it step by step. After you finish the model, post the wireframes. After you've done some textures, post the textured model, with your texture sheets. Talk about your goals for the piece, and your limitations/budgets. Not bad though, and good luck with the next piece! :]
Hi Jessica, thanks for the critique I wish I had more time to post a more step by step process these projects are on tight deadlines, and other class work and kids don't leave a lot of time. However when working on personal projects in the future I will keep your suggestion
in mind because I need all the help from friends on the forum I can get. LOL!!!:)
Thanks again!!!!
Is this only the diffuse map or do you have additional maps applied? I would understand if it was only a diffuse map if it was "hand painted," but this doesn't seem to be the case.
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But that is always too much for people to try and critique at once, so it will be more helpful to everyone (and especially to you!) if you take it step by step. After you finish the model, post the wireframes. After you've done some textures, post the textured model, with your texture sheets. Talk about your goals for the piece, and your limitations/budgets. Not bad though, and good luck with the next piece! :]
in mind because I need all the help from friends on the forum I can get. LOL!!!:)
Thanks again!!!!
Is this only the diffuse map or do you have additional maps applied? I would understand if it was only a diffuse map if it was "hand painted," but this doesn't seem to be the case.
Thanks!!!