Sci fi Girl
Hello 
, I've finally decided something to work on in my free time. Everyday I work on hand painted stuff with no normal maps 
. So I decided I wanted to do a project to spice things up and add more variety to my portfolio. I'm hoping for a lot of critique. So here's a concept I did. Some of the things I'm not sure about at the moment are the boots, hair, colors, and maybe finer details like embroideries and such.
, I've finally decided something to work on in my free time. Everyday I work on hand painted stuff with no normal maps . So I decided I wanted to do a project to spice things up and add more variety to my portfolio. I'm hoping for a lot of critique. So here's a concept I did. Some of the things I'm not sure about at the moment are the boots, hair, colors, and maybe finer details like embroideries and such.
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Pick a color any color!
I think the design is cool in general, but I have a few concerns. First off the jacket seems to blend together with the suit; maybe it will become less of an issue with good material definition to set them apart, but instinctively I feel that it'd be a good idea to give the jacket some different colours, and/or make the shoulders and sleeves less form-fitting. I dunno, there's just something slighly puzzling about its design.
The belt is a little confusing as well. How does it connect around the back? How does it just not fall off as soon as she walks?
Finally, I'm a bit unsure about those open panels on her chest.
All in all I like where you're going with this though, looking forward to future updates.
Han Solo and a bunch other people wear the same kind of belts too. And personally I like the belt xD
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-6851eZqsBZ0/TfKN25d00kI/AAAAAAAAC7Y/Ky_IMn8EYwY/s1600/han-solo.jpg
Like the new boots.
You might have to fix up the wrist area - it seems that her wrist has restricted movement because of the hard armor pressed on her wrist. Try to replace it with something cloth like - or just have the hard piece end right before the joint of the wrist.
I think I like the face on the left better It's actually the newer face unlike the text leads you to believe. I like the chest piece on the left as well but If I do go with it I wanna somehow make it fit better either with color or flattening the shape because I like the shape of the cutout. I fixed the chest hopefully what you said is fixed. You weren't very clear.
also have you tried her with a more mature face? she kinda looks like a teen at the moment but that might be what you're going for xD
Han Solo wears a belt around his waist, with a thigh holster hanging off of it (also attached to his leg, presumably to keep it from sliding down). Austin's character is (was!) wearing a gun belt slung over the hips with a strap hanging off it that didn't seem to serve any purpose. I didn't mind the look of it so much as I questioned the physics of it. In any event, it seems to have been addressed now, and I find the new belt much less objectionable.
In fact, I like the newest update a lot! The head on the right in the newest picture is my least favourite, but the other one with the long hair looks quite nice. I didn't mind the original one, or bubbie's edit though, seems like you could take it in any number of directions.^^ I vastly prefer the covered up chest, though.
I'm gonna start modeling if there isn't too much feedback.
Really looking forward to the modelling! Keep at it