High Poly Boombox

lilymac · Oct 2012

Hello Polycount! My first post to have my current work-in-progress critiqued. This is the first high poly model I have made of a JVC Stereo RC-550 boombox. I intend on baking it relatively soon since I'm working on it for a class.

Thanks you for your time!

JamesWild · Oct 2012

Given that it's the back of an item that's probably a background prop it won't hugely matter but I'd say the vent fins on the back could use some work. Remove the faces at the ends of the fins so they don't turn into blobs and use a tool like Array to evenly space them.

Looks good though!

Aga22 · Oct 2012

it needs more segments around the speakers...other than that, nice.

joeriv · Oct 2012

and check out the edge above the large speaker (that starts in the right corner).
Seems like a edge loop is doing weird things there.

Also, the 4 rectangles sticking out on the smaller speaker, you are missing some edge loops there.

lilymac · Oct 2012

Thank you all so much! I'll work on it more.

High Poly Boombox

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