Gas Mask

samuelyoun · Oct 2012

Hello everyone!
This is my first post on this forum, and I need some feedback on my high poly gas mask progress. All critiques are welcome.

WEe · Oct 2012

The straps are too thick, and too soft around the edges. Make them harder. Overall, you should lessen the amount of softness of edges as it's quite visible where they should be a bit tighter. Also, the oxygen container(or whatever it's called), should be wider, but it also seems a bit too long. Also, you seem to have alot of "seperate parts" For example, the thing that connects the oxygen supply should be part of the mask and shouldn't "pop out" like that.

samuelyoun · Oct 2012

Oh okay thanks for the feedback.

samuelyoun · Nov 2012

Textured it and stuff. Feedback is appreciated :poly122:

maximumsproductions · Nov 2012

I don't know how closely your following the ref but what stood out to me is these two proportions aren't matching too well in terms of thinkness or scale, but I don't know one thing about gas masks :P

Gas Mask

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