The BRAWL² Tournament Challenge has been announced!
It starts May 12, and ends Sept 12. Let's see what you got!
https://polycount.com/discussion/237047/the-brawl²-tournament
It starts May 12, and ends Sept 12. Let's see what you got!
https://polycount.com/discussion/237047/the-brawl²-tournament
ARMONY.......
polycounter lvl 13
STARTING NEW PROP...FOR PESONAL DEMO.........
THIS ONE IS..CONCEPT...........
THIS ONE IS..CONCEPT...........
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MY PREVIOUS UPDATES OF HIGH POLY.......
Typing in all caps over the internet is the same as screaming at a person that is standing 1 foot in front of you. Most of us take this for granted but I think it should be said.
With that said, your high poly seems to have a ton of detail, and is looking good. There seems to be some pinching on the main body of armory where the screw insets are. That will show up in normal map, so I would try to smooth that out.
Did you make the concept yourself?
Also, did you mean to name the thread Armony and not Armory?
Nice job on the High so far.
As far as critiques:
The pipes on the side look a bit too small, the arms look like they are sticking out too far, and overall most of the smaller details look like they are not beefy enough. Thin hydraulics, sharp bevels on larger pieces, etc.
suburbbum @ thanx
Quack! @ Man dnt know abt that caps language....,.i will work on that pinching and give
him a nice smooth
EiGHT @ thanx
Don Karnage @ no this one is not my concept this is concept of game Natural selection 2
and abt armony ...this one is my mistake :poly130:
shrew81 @ work on that pipes now again i m wrking on my high poly and try match with concept.....
Im sure you probably know, but all in-game textures must be some multiple of 2, ie. 8,16,32,64,128,512,1024,2048. Textures should be 2048x2048 or 1024x512 aswell.
That being said, the texturing practice looks great
I would remove those 2 middle edges... they're not doing anything for the silhouette.
That said, nice job and keep it up!
Tokoya @Thanx m also wrking on that long time.....now want to finish it.......
DOG-GY @Thanx..But for WIP posts i think presentation not matter.this is my persional view...but agree with that wasting of space .....will post some close screen shots...
DJ_Aaron @ Thanx.....
[HP] @ Thanx.....will finish it soon......
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It is looking like this:
And there are a couple of things doing it in my opinion.
First being the streakyness to your paint wear. Kinda makes it look like wood grain.
Secondly (the one that is doing it the most) is the color you have underneath the chipped paint. Your paint is chipping away to reveal what? Looks like wood... And it should be chipping away to reveal what would be new and clean metal.
So you need a better base color because you sir have a really realistic looking toy block :P
Keep it coming!
AlecMoody @ Thanx.. will try to make it perfect.....
Try to make it like this......
Ofcoarse this would all be moot if it was built with some wierd futuristic nano tech or some shiz :P
Hope this helps
[edit] and I disagree about it looking like wood because of the color choice. A block yes, for the reason I stated above but not wood. I actually think you have the colors and wear pretty much nailed down, it reads as metal to me and looks gritty and quite believable.
Xaltar..@ i just Think about that and i try to make this frmae in two part....{but tried that in texturing }
about wood try to make it more metalic n try to make a better specular.......
these r some images want know that is it looks better or not......PLZ C&C
Nece one...waiting fr more...
Otherwise good work so far. Keep it on.
Also for clarification, I don`t think he was referring to the diagonal "danger" stripes, but the little micro, 1 pixel honey comb detail you have in the stripes. (which would be too small to even see in the concept) imo- it would probably read better if they were just danger yellow with some scratches here n there.
It also looks like theres a 1 pixel, black outline around these stripes. Whats that all about?
(keep the diagonal warning stripes, but maybe reduce the frequency of the stripes so they aren't so skinny)
Also- it looks like your starting to put pure, 100% black into your texture. Just remember theres no 100% black anything in life. (except maybe the cold vacuum of space). Try to train your brain to think in terms or warm/cool when it comes to lights and darks. you`ll find it produces quite pleasing results.
Looking good thought man. I think you have something promising here- just GET-ER-DONE!!!!!
And that warm/cool effect just love that if u have any link for more info abt that plz frwrd me and my updates will come soon.
this thread is great.
Working on materials on a vacuum isn't a very good idea, so much about material definition is relationships to other materials, so you can't just work on one chunk at a time.
Now for your actual texturing here, I think you're going way way too high contrast with your diffuse, with way too much color variation. The spec is where this sort of love should go.
jeremiah_bigley- I Think i have to do this again n update will come soon.
but for this i need ur c&c
Thank u.