Red Army Nurse
polycounter lvl 17
Hi everyone,
here´s a little something I made based on a picture I found on the internet. thought I could share:
I´m going to make some nice marmoset shots with textured model as well, when I take some time.
here´s a little something I made based on a picture I found on the internet. thought I could share:
I´m going to make some nice marmoset shots with textured model as well, when I take some time.
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I like old pictures of the Red Army.
I think you need to tone down the purple lighting its going crazy on her skin.
The wrinkles kind of bug me, the cloth doesn't seem to interact with her underlying frame.
I think this is a pretty great model, but these small issues are holding it back.
I´m pretty much done with this model, I want to focus on some other things I have in progress for my portfolio (job-hunting season). Maybe I´ll post the textures as well, I just need put it together on some sheet to make it look all nice and compact - I´m not much of a presentation master, most of my things look 100% better live in 3d. My all-time problem.
I think the skin is still clashing with the rest of the model though. Still a bit purple.
The textural detail you've added to the fabric gives it a nice realistic touch, but now the hair and skin look a bit plasticy by comparison. I think the thumb might be just a touch too big as well.
- BoBo
Looks great to me, maybe some of the folds on the legs could be toned down a little, they all seem equally sharp, but that might just be the shadows making it look so.
Crits: While you've done a great job sculpting a lot of realistic cloth wrinkles, I just think its a bit overkill. Its overpowering the larger forms you want your normal map to represent. So all we're getting is all this medium/high frequency cloth detail, rather than any strong description of her underlying form. Also yeah...face texture needs a little work/balancing.
low odor - I added the hem-line (diffuse only, didn´t want to mess with the hipoly and re-project normals). I also wanted to add the patches on the knees when I was working on the hipoly already, but the local symmetry in ZBrush 4.0 kinda failed me so I didn´t want to mess with it (mental note: I could model the patches and project it on the mesh using that new ZBrush feature/brush... not sure about the name, but I can see the whole process. so thanks for bringing that on my mind:) )
ScoobyDoofus - yeah, you could be right about the overkill. I was working on a lot of models where they asked me to have wrinkles EVERYWHERE (there were situations I had to have wrinkles ON WRINKLES. well, almost...). So that´s probably where I got the disease
Snader - Flowers... You know, I´m not that kind of a guy
So this time I made some tweaks again (kinda against my will, but there were some serious critiques and seeing the deficiencies was really bugging me), and here´s what I´ve got:
I added some shadows in the textures, tweaked the gloss of the hair, and chose a bit warmer tones for the skin this time. I should do something about the beret, it´s kinda bugging me for some reason. Also, the star I added on the insignia isn´t still fitting in (it´s made just with the diffuse, I´m too lazy to give it some normals).
This time I also played with the presentation a bit ("fancy" gradient background, text and shadow around the model. no touch-ups were made on the model in PS), should look a lot better in the portfolio now.
Still not perfect, but I´m pretty satisfied with the result now. Anyway, any critiques are still appreciated, keep ´em coming if you have any.
If you are using Xoliul shader, can't you just use some more ambient light from a cube map? the should give you a nice lighting.
Also there are some oversaturated browns in the clothing that stick out to me..
Cheers
a colour tweak of the textures and slightly nicer presentation and its going to be amazing!