I like the model, yeah. I would elongate the arms, because they don't look as exaggerated as the neck., make them longer and i think that will work out better.
I agree with Spug. If you look at your own arms in proportion to your body if you raise them. The elbow falls right at the top of the head. If I measure on your model it falls on the ear. So it looks like the entire arm should be elongated by around 25%.
I agree with Spug. If you look at your own arms in proportion to your body if you raise them. The elbow falls right at the top of the head. If I measure on your model it falls on the ear. So it looks like the entire arm should be elongated by around 25%.
The model looks like you have a good start. The only thing bugging me is that you called this a hot alien girl.. well "into" alien chicks as we are (geeky/strange as that may be) i think you're falling short on the HOT part. A lot of what makes a girl "hot" is how she holds herself and how her body curves. Right now your chick is pretty much all cylinders. You need to vary her body's proportions so her rib cage, hips, stomach, breasts, and whatnot pop and demand the eye a little more. Look at girls you find attractive and copy what you see. Jessica Biel, Megan Fox ect.
Good start man, i wanna see thing as it comes along.
jesus christ man get some pubes on that. right now it's alien loli. at least put a fold where cunny meets leg so it doesnt look so... young and elastic
Sort of looks like Sid The Sloth from Ice Age. I like elements of your design but I don't think it's cohesive. I guess if you just want to be done that's fine but you could probably have an interesting character design if you put more time into it.
The thing is your modeling isn't really doing anything to express the anatomy other than tube arms and a tube torso with boobs. Creating aliens and other humanoid creatures successfully usually seems to land on stylishly exaggerating or combining some aspect of the anatomy in an interesting way...The thing is there's 0 interest in a tube. Even skinny girls have a variation in their side profiles. The hip bone protrudes, the ribcage creates a shape, the way the muscles interlock of the back and side interlock.. It's these shapes that make the silhouette and shape of a girl "hot" I'm not saying you have to make you're alien hippy or like a model or anything. I just that there needs to be more to the shape to really create any interest.
what was said about the tubes makes sense. your geometry looks pretty tigth, why not take it to zbrush where u can have at it without worrying about breaking your mesh flow.
@Robioto - this model was just to break away from my other stuff I didn't plan on doing anything real exciting with it.
@raul - this model started in zbrush I retopped it and now its back in zbrush I have posted the ZTL if anyone is interested in going insane details with it or something.
I did a "sculptover" of your model using the .ZTL you shared with some of ideas that I think may improve your model. Fundamentally, your sculpting is sound - I like that you didn't try to over describe the forms and instead kept them fairly simple and elegant. Just keep a very careful eye on proportions, and always have good reference material hand, and you'll do fine.
I actually liked it. The way u had it before. It reminded me of those alien creatures that made the clone army in star wars ep 2. And it also reminds me of that one cg short. Moon girl. I could dig a link.
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You could Improve the Details a lil bit more, but its looking good soo far
and nipple part..<.<
and the lips...<.<
no matter..awsome work makecg
Boosting her boobs will make it look even more amazing
this is all i built I am gonna pose the arms in a certain way and call it quits =D
muff.
I like the model, yeah. I would elongate the arms, because they don't look as exaggerated as the neck., make them longer and i think that will work out better.
Or he could make the neck Shorter
Good start man, i wanna see thing as it comes along.
also the vagina looks weird, like a huge cunt that sits where dicks start
This made me LOL.
ohh and u forgot normal maps xD
maybe he was aiming for something like Roger
I am defining some stuff on the actual model though.
i'm not building the full model this is pretty much just a bust sort of.
someone's using porn/models as reference
By the way, the head soo much reminds me of stwie from Family guy.
This is an interesting concept, however and i am interested where it goes.
here is the ZTL Feel free to finish this for me or destroy it.
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1690488/hotalien/hotalien.zip
it's uv mapped and everything
@Cthogua - your right great comment too.
@Harry - yes
@Joopson - yes
@Robioto - this model was just to break away from my other stuff I didn't plan on doing anything real exciting with it.
@raul - this model started in zbrush I retopped it and now its back in zbrush I have posted the ZTL if anyone is interested in going insane details with it or something.
ah, don't be a jerk. If you wanted people to just post "good work" and "awesome" maybe you should have posted it on game-artist.
But seriously this has got potential, don't let hypersensitivity get in the way of it becoming an awesome piece
But really I'm done.
I actually liked it. The way u had it before. It reminded me of those alien creatures that made the clone army in star wars ep 2. And it also reminds me of that one cg short. Moon girl. I could dig a link.
Harry - post it on ga.....don't be hatin! Lol
oversensetive man