Portfolio Review

Ashervisalis

I'll be passing around my portfolio soon enough, and I want to get your guys' opinions on which projects to dump from it. Some stuff isn't very new, but I find it difficult to choose what work of mine isn't worthy. I've got 11 projects on there.

I'm aiming for a junior position sometime soon, whether its in games or animation, so it'd be cool if you guys gave me your opinions on my skill level as well.

Thanks for any help and opinions!

https://thomasfraser.artstation.com/

radiancef0rge

Why does your 3d game portfolio say that you are a Electronic Music Producer?

Ashervisalis

I wanted my portfolio to mention my music. Should I get rid of it?

Elithenia

if you are looking at getting a job in 3d, then I would suggest to have that instead. 

Ashervisalis

Alright, I've removed the title, thanks! Does anybody have any suggestions as to anything I should remove?

Kevin Albers

I'd ditch the Yurt. Maybe put the violin and terminal as the first 2 images. Work more on the violin texture (mainly the roughness/spec, adding a subtle bit of wear in a couple of places. Also, add a couple of very minor/small scratches or dings so it looks used, and not like a perfect product render). 

Ashervisalis

Thanks @Kevin Albers. I've hidden the Yurt from the portfolio and will see about working on the violin. Thanks for your guys' help!

Ashervisalis

Hey all, I've done a pretty bit update to my portfolio. I'll be working on a forest environment coming up. I'm wondering if you guys could give me a critique on what it's missing or what's not working (mix in a little praise so I don't end the day in tears haha).

https://thomasfraser.artstation.com/