Wow I can't believe you made this many posts with only getting 1 reply! For your character sketches all of their heads are too teeny, their noses and mouths are just crammed in there, I agree with Razgriz that your anatomy needs some work and it's definitely got that high school fanart look to it. The reason it has that…
cool render+model. Presentation wise. Think about where u want the viewers eye to go first. The spidey's head right? What makes it Not go there. The flashing lights on the legs. I dnt wana look at legs. i wana see the face. The spidey is lost with the super white flooring. u want the reflections mainly on the spidey to…