i would leave the hair as you made it because imo looks more original, but yet not quite like cloud, try to make the face like cloud and leave the hair dunno , keep rockin !
Hey guys,i decided to give it some love,so i redid some diffuse and all the spec maps,also fixed the lighting.Lets hope i did not ruin the model this time ehehe Full size render here!
I did a little modification on the face. This my favorite version of cloud. For hide layer yourself you can download psd there : http://sama.van.free.fr/divershelp/fuxer_Cloud_A_00.psd And usualy, I think squareEnix use a lot of soft colors, and there is rarely yellow highlight on characters.
His feet look kind of weird...as if the boot is bigger than his leg and is slouching. Pretty cool idea though. Something I really like is the face redux---Cloud doesn't look super soft anymore, he looks like he's angry/been through some stuff.