Hi LeoJr and thanks for your reply and suggestions:)
Spearhead will be parallel to the camera, so intersection point at the right place. But don't know for now to show this, still thinking and open to suggestions
Yeah, neck short, I'll do a long neck
About focus.. Yes it's probably should be changed, but whole illustration in progress so focus will be changed too But sure, focus on her face is better
About the spear, I guess I thought it was closer to the camera because the blurring made it look like a depth of field effect. I guess you're trying to make it look like it's in motion?
I'm also aware that it's still in progress, so keep up the good work and good luck!
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I have some small suggestions, if you're interested:
- She's lit in a way that the focal points appears to be her hip area - maybe more focus on her face?
- Her neck feels a little short to me.
- Check the perspective on the spearhead - if it's pointing towards the camera, the intersection point of the inside edges would be farther back.
Good luck and keep up the good work!
Spearhead will be parallel to the camera, so intersection point at the right place. But don't know for now to show this, still thinking and open to suggestions
Yeah, neck short, I'll do a long neck
About focus.. Yes it's probably should be changed, but whole illustration in progress so focus will be changed too But sure, focus on her face is better
Thanks again!
About the spear, I guess I thought it was closer to the camera because the blurring made it look like a depth of field effect. I guess you're trying to make it look like it's in motion?
I'm also aware that it's still in progress, so keep up the good work and good luck!