Stylised Dragon

slickbadger · Jun 2017

Hi there everyone! This is my first post on polycount (although I have been visiting for a while now)!
I am a student studying computer games design at Staffordhire University and have been trying hard to develop my 3D skills (particularly in zbrush).
Here is a dragon I have been working on, I did all of the work in zbrush and the renders are from keyshot.
I would love to read your feedback and criticisms (good and bad

) as I know I still have a lot to learn!
I hope you like my work and I will be uploading more projects when I can.
All the best,
Jared.

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/5w/17y1cd7octqw.jpg

jose.fuentes · Jun 2017

I would work on your anatomy, even though its stylized try to reference real life animals and mimmic what you see

slickbadger · Jun 2017

jose.fuentes said:

I would work on your anatomy, even though its stylized try to reference real life animals and mimmic what you see

Thanks for the advice. Is there a particular area of the model you feel I could improve on?

Brian "Panda" Choi · Jun 2017

Proportionally, it feels really unbalanced the the front deltoids are so big. It almost seems comical in a "dang, that's a little tooe xaggerated."

I'd shrink them down, get it all feeling a little more balanced.

slickbadger · Jun 2017

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

Proportionally, it feels really unbalanced the the front deltoids are so big. It almost seems comical in a "dang, that's a little tooe xaggerated."

I'd shrink them down, get it all feeling a little more balanced.

Thank you. That's just the type of feedback I was looking for. Do you feel the overall anatomy of the muscles is accurate? Even if the shoulders are out of proportion? Or would you recommend re-modelling the shoulders entirely?

Stylised Dragon

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