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Hi guys and gals, I'm starting off this thread as I've been nagged for the longest time to get one started by my lecturers and finally biting the bullet. 
Just gonna be posting in order to get any feedback and critique from the wealth of insanely amazing artists on this site. 

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  • PatsuKiki
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    So to start this thread off, I posted around a year ago my MOON environment and at the time it was a second year uni assignment. But recently as I had a little time, I wanted to give the lighting and the roughness textures a little TLC as I had received some great feedback advice but never found the time until recently to make the changes. The light strips in the wall columns now have a dirty grill texture applied and the ceiling light grills also have a more noticeable texture than before. All surfaces now have a lot more rough variation to make them glimmer as one of the critiques I got was that everything felt too 'matte'. I also played with different colour combos. I wanted the comms area to stand out more than everything else so I gave it more of a white light like in the film. And added fairy dust to add a bit of 'lived in' feel. 

    Here's before: 




    Here's now:









    If you can think of anything that would help to improve it, I would appreciate it. 
    Cheers

    Craig
  • Will_M
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    I love this kind of style you have and the treatment of the light is really atmospheric
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    PatsuKiki said:
    Hi guys and gals, I'm starting off this thread as I've been nagged for the longest time to get one started by my lecturers and finally biting the bullet.
    And that's why we nag because we see great work. ;)

    Love the new direction for the brown panel strips, the lighting reads so much better as well. A bit more direction on focal point would be nice, see image below. Love the new sepia tone.

    Only got to put up with us until May 2017 and then your free. Ha-ha!! super proud of you, keep it up!




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    The mood from the lighting is fantastic. Only thing I could suggest is perhaps playing around with having some personal items around/on the desk?
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    Will_M said:
    I love this kind of style you have and the treatment of the light is really atmospheric



    PatsuKiki said:
    Hi guys and gals, I'm starting off this thread as I've been nagged for the longest time to get one started by my lecturers and finally biting the bullet.
    And that's why we nag because we see great work. ;)

    Love the new direction for the brown panel strips, the lighting reads so much better as well. A bit more direction on focal point would be nice, see image below. Love the new sepia tone.

    Only got to put up with us until May 2017 and then your free. Ha-ha!! super proud of you, keep it up!

    Ace said:
    The mood from the lighting is fantastic. Only thing I could suggest is perhaps playing around with having some personal items around/on the desk?

    Thank you Will, yeah it's an oldish project but it's the lighting and improving it that always brings me back to re-tweak a few things.

    - Point taken littleclaude, haha. glad you like the new set up. Just trying to implement the feedback Mark gave me when he came in that time. Thanks for the suggestion, I might make some post-tweaks to highlight focal areas.

    ACE, (tl;dr- great suggestion, they're in the making)
    Thanks for the comment and feedback. And you're 100 percent right, personality is the biggest thing missing from the scene. It's all very just big weird shaped boxes at the moment and funky lighting and not many nice little touches. I have a whole list of assets I plan to make 'a little mug, a blanket draped over the chair, the main character's glasses, and also to flesh out all the other rooms that you see in the film. 
    However at the moment, just working on my final year project which has to take priority I'm afraid. 
  • PatsuKiki
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    I guess some of these should be in RAWK but I'll post them here any ways to show our uni project.

    So I'm working on our final project at uni called  'Fringe'. It's an open world - adventure - walking simulator esque thing.
    My role is basically - Environemnt artist for all things organic - rocks, trees, foliage, layout, lighting and atmosphere fx etc.

    And for the past couple of weeks I've been making a bunch of modular rock sets that can hopefully be bundled together and make some nice shapes




    Very large sheer cliff face in Marmoset, (4000 tris - it's a lot for rock but these guys are massive in game so want to keep the shape looking nice)

    Going for this sort of look (the background rocks) 



    Rock wall bundle 



    Generic boulder rock



    Generic boulder rock 2 (affectionately known as turd rock)

    And here's some in game shots of the progress so far (all trees and weird janky rocks are currently proxy and gonna be replaced later)


    A quick test in engine with my snow material slapped on


    A quick test in engine with my snow material slapped on



    An adventure begins...


  • Krato
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    These are really cool. Did you use the Unity engine for the rock photos?
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    Krato said:
    These are really cool. Did you use the Unity engine for the rock photos?

    Cheers Krato 

    Actually the five super clean ones at the top were rendered in Marmoset 3
    and the in engine shots were rendered in Unreal Engine 4.
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    So here's a little update on the work I have been doing for my final year project at UNI. 

    Mainly for the past week or so, I've been refining rocks, re-doing the landscape material with a bunch of new textures created in Megascans studio (I know you're gonna say that's cheating, but we love the look of them and it's quick) oh and yesterday, completely re-did the lighting as it was looking horrible. Hopefully a bit crispier now. 

    and also today, started on my first attempts at creating the 'actual' trees that will be in the game. 

    (disclaimer, some shite proxy trees also still remain)

    Feedback and crit, always appreciated.

    Already on TODO list


    Add forest floor bedding (twigs, fallen leaves etc)

    More tiny rocks here and there

    Snow on the trees, I know, I know.

    Finishing off various rock textures. 

    Making new and more weird looking foliage (all in the plans)

    replacing out old ugly trees with nice new ones. 



    MLdn3chpngNew landscape materials, soils puddles etc..


    rJk0QKqpngRefined the snow texture a little to make it pop a little more.


    MCkPclypngNew rock stuff. 


    dGXEhVipngNew Lighting scheme. Have gone full on with all the possible cool looking render settings I can find. Frame rate is dead, but it looks nice, well I think so. Feel free to slam me 



    New sexy hero tree. by no means a finished piece, but better than previous ones, has tesselation and snow plugged in now. 


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    xeJZ3ckpngThe gorge with new lighting. 

    And new rivers are coming. Ben the other Envi artist is in the process of building a spline based river with auto flow built in as we speak.


    CnC welcome 

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