Very upset that do not participate in the DW, but the choice of the character is good, it will be interesting to look at its implementation in your performance. Good luck in the contest. I will with great pleasure that follow the theme. I'm sorry for my english.
Awesome Sketch illusion, can't wait to see your progress, I like the clear distinction between material types in your sketch, should be a strong design element in your final, great job.
little bit wider hips little bit narrower shoulders. I would also say to match your concept give her a little more weight in the legs in general compared to the arms. nice start, kick ass concept, love that hair!
Very nice work. But obviously you want criticism as well (we all do).
Based on the concept, if you never told me that that was christie from DOA, I would of never of guessed. So there's my feedback, please don't kill me.
I think the eyes are a little too slanted, and the corners of the eyes are too far back. (From the 3/4 view, it really feels like i shold be able to see more of the side of her face).
really nice progress! outfit and hair are coming along awesome. i think if i had to crit something at this point maybe her jawline could take a second look. right now i have Hazardous's banner up and the style of his valkarie seems to be pretty similar to what you are going for facial feature wise, but her jawline is much lower and a bit broader, might be worth a look :thumbup::thumbup: awesome progress, great outfit design again.
Cool! Loving those cybergoggles!
The skirt is pretty rigid looking though, and the chin/mouth are a tad on the weird side...
But keep going though! It's looking great.
Looking good! Couldn't find much to crit, proportions are spot on and clothing is excellent. If anything, I guess my nitpick would be that there's nothing about her that I would identify as Christie. The original character doesn't really have many defining features visually other than the short white hair, and in DoA she's the 'mysterious assassin' type whereas this character feels like 'swashbuckling fashionista'... But I can tell you took some design elements from the ref costume, so I guess it's a really minor gripe. I'm already way more interested in your version anyhow. :P Can tell it's gonna be awesome when it gets closer to finished.
Thanks guys for comments and critics, really appreciate this.
Sorry, not answered long time. I'm swamped by work and have no idea how to finish this to deadline
JacqueChoi Fixed eyes, thanks )
woogity Thank you Yeah, Hazardous is pro in modeling of sexy girls )))
Maph Yes, I will back to the face proportions I guess. And also I'm going to do retopology of skirt and may be other fabric parts
gd6 Thanks, mate
Chandler
I see, thank you. I'll try to add something, may be black leather elements instead brown. It's realy hard to me decide how to make She more similar and keep 'mysterious' look, because I like this steampunk image too.
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Can't wait to see what you do, good luck on finding a reference to show.
$!nz hope, it will be fun )))
Inpw thank you ) I'm not so sure - I have no experience in chick modeling, but I will try
eof Hey! nice meet you too
Good luck!
XenoKratios Yeah! Finally I decided to do booooobs
Some ref pieces
Finished rough sketch.
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Now it's time for ZBrush
maybe her shoulders are a bit wide in the concept but thats one small push in zbrush ^^
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The boots need some straps though.
Maph yes, I will do straps, I guess )
onelunglewis yeah, it's not easy task for me, but I'll try
Working on body. I'm not happy with proportions - are still in progress
Based on the concept, if you never told me that that was christie from DOA, I would of never of guessed. So there's my feedback, please don't kill me.
mxdirector
Working on details
minor nitpick:
I think the eyes are a little too slanted, and the corners of the eyes are too far back. (From the 3/4 view, it really feels like i shold be able to see more of the side of her face).
The skirt is pretty rigid looking though, and the chin/mouth are a tad on the weird side...
But keep going though! It's looking great.
Sorry, not answered long time. I'm swamped by work and have no idea how to finish this to deadline
JacqueChoi Fixed eyes, thanks )
woogity Thank you
Maph Yes, I will back to the face proportions I guess. And also I'm going to do retopology of skirt and may be other fabric parts
gd6 Thanks, mate
Chandler
I see, thank you. I'll try to add something, may be black leather elements instead brown. It's realy hard to me decide how to make She more similar and keep 'mysterious' look, because I like this steampunk image too.