Your scope is probably out of reach. As an individual presentation, the interior corridor, outdoor area or temple would be within your grasp. Attempting to do them all at once will leave each wanting.
That said, one thing for each section:
For the interior, you have detail and depth modeled in the walls, but the floors and ceilings are flat. They should be just as detailed.
On the temple, are you using BSP to build that, particularly the stairs? Because that's a no-no. It should all about static meshes built in max.
The exterior walkways appear unsupported and weak. A little depth goes a long way. A support piece can be added to the bottom for a big help.
i like the bottom pic, but the stairs could be a bit more rocky. right now they are straight cut and have no irregularities. looking forward to seeing more
Here is my level I am currently working on for class.I am a second year game student and this is our first level.All things (except the fire which will be changed) is mine and the level is in work progress any crits and comments welcome.
Interior Section
Interior Shot 2
Another small Wall
Outdoor Shot No Fog
Outdoor With Fog
Thanks for the comments that have already been received I look forward to more
You should have left the work up. The longer it's up, the more feedback you would receive... And even if the feedback was too late to implement, it may be useful for the next project...
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That said, one thing for each section:
For the interior, you have detail and depth modeled in the walls, but the floors and ceilings are flat. They should be just as detailed.
On the temple, are you using BSP to build that, particularly the stairs? Because that's a no-no. It should all about static meshes built in max.
The exterior walkways appear unsupported and weak. A little depth goes a long way. A support piece can be added to the bottom for a big help.
heh the indoor ones reminded me of quake
Here is my level I am currently working on for class.I am a second year game student and this is our first level.All things (except the fire which will be changed) is mine and the level is in work progress any crits and comments welcome.
Interior Section
Interior Shot 2
Another small Wall
Outdoor Shot No Fog
Outdoor With Fog
Thanks for the comments that have already been received I look forward to more