Goth Model

RobH

Heres a model I have been working on for the past 4 or 5 days. Its not done yet, I wanted to get some feed back on its design. To me it looks to plain, I was thinking about giving it a vampire touch to it. Like a bit of blood running down her mouth, maybe more belts.... Iam not quite sure.

What do you guys think?

http://www.geocities.com/renders19/GothPic.html

Polycount: 2660
(sorry about the geocities, I dont have anywhere to post pics. If you cant see the pic it should be up in the next 10 or 20 mins)

FatAssasin

Pretty cool overall. The main thing that jumps out at me is that she seems very wide in the front view. So the first thing I would do is slim her up.

Thermidor

I agree , the body looks very masculine, but its looking pretty cool otherwise

Wendy de Boer

I really like the character!
I do agree with the previous comments, though. She looks very broad from the front, especially from the waist up. Also, looking from the side, she seems to be leaning forward a bit.

I made an animated GIF to show you the changes I would make to the mesh:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v19/wayuki/gothpic_example.gif

And... if you're looking for a better image host, this one is quite good:
http://photobucket.com/

MoP

yep DemonPrincess is on the money with that animated GIF. maybe even add a tiny bit more curvature to the spine in the side view too, might make her look a little more "balanced".
also i think the flesh could do with a tiny bit more colour, smoothness and sharpness (highlights mainly) - and the highlights on the pants could be sharper too, I think.
Good stuff though.

MoP

RobH

Thanks for all the feed back everyone! Iam gonna take every ones advise and slim the model down and work on its texturing some more. Iam still gonna check up on this post so if anyone has anymore tips or ideas let me know. Ill repost a updated pic in the future but it might be a while (playing WoW beta )

Thanks again.

poopinmymouth

You have a nice start there, lots of cool things going on. I just wish there was more color.

spider2cool

A key in modeling females is the hips. the hips, unlike a man's, are equil to or wider than the sholders.