Male Character WIP (Update)

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Above is the updated version of the below digital sculpture.

Above is the male character I've been working on from sometime but still confused what to do with this or where to go from here.
Any suggestions?

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  • carvuliero
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    carvuliero polycounter lvl 3
    Watch Dangal again and fix his anatomy

  • AshishVerma
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    AshishVerma polycounter lvl 4
    @carvuliero Thanks for the comment but can you please explain what to be fixed in this, that would be really helpful      :smile:
  • carvuliero
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    carvuliero polycounter lvl 3
    I can do that :
    First you cannot lateral/medial rotate your lower leg when standing , bone have 3 degree divination from vertical so pretty straight / bottom half of lower leg is too thin /missing proper curvature of anterior leg (in part tibialis anterior) it should be double reverse curve /missing medial knee bulge (sartorius grasilis semimembranosus semitendinosus and fat ) / missing tensor fascia latae hit / front torso too flat /forearm is broken / there is something wrong with pectoralis guess you made it bulge in the middle but should be on the bottom and bunch other thing but try to fix listed above first


  • AshishVerma
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    AshishVerma polycounter lvl 4
    @carvuliero thanks a lot for the detailed explanation. As you've pointed out, I can see the mistakes I've committed in this one and I'll definitely work on these to improve my sculpt better. Thanks again and good luck on whatever you are doing.    :)

    Edit:
    Did few changes to it, please let me know if it is looking better or else.. thank in advance

  • carvuliero
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    carvuliero polycounter lvl 3
    Seems things are not going in the right direction so lets try something else
    For the most parts proportions are ok (ignoring hands and shoulder-> things below shoulder) so try focus on everything below belly button (area the currently require most attention ) , just hide everything above
    I have attached few reference that hopefully will help , 3d scan in the first image is almost the same pose(note that quadriceps is flexed ) , you can rotate slightly front and side views of second image to match your pose


  • AshishVerma
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    AshishVerma polycounter lvl 4
    @carvuliero
    Update: (below belly button)

  • carvuliero
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    carvuliero polycounter lvl 3
    You should really take some time to study this charts
    To check your progress take a screenshot of your work and compare it with your reference in something like photoshop , then check if both are similar .Can you point few drastic differences ?


  • AshishVerma
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    AshishVerma polycounter lvl 4
    @carvuliero
    Sorry for my impatience and thank a lot for the advice, I'll try to put that into use and compare the results.
    Cheers
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