death_wip

shadowz

hi

practicing death animation .
need your valuable feedback so i can improve this shot.


https://youtu.be/CXVZPKH5OII

thanks

R3D

What kind of reference are you using? The hop at frame 80 feels a bit out of place and jerky, it doesn't flow as well.

_adamturnbull

The hit feels nice but when he drops to the ground it's a little messy. The bounce is a little too linear and doesn't feel natural. One part of the body should hit the ground first and the rest should flow into it. If you can add this to syncsketch I can draw some notes if that would help!

shadowz

thanks for the reply. @_adamturnbull @R3D

here's the syncsketch link

https://syncsketch.com/playground/4dde75cc2ed6412e92c2ee9e4c84b5c7#376087

R3D

the javeling that sticks inside him isn't staying perpendicular with the hit and is rotating strangely throughout the shot

shadowz

 @R3D thanks for the reply. 

 i will change the weapon later on. its for reference purpose only.

shadowz

another update:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DT_p42xvY44&feature=youtu.be

https://syncsketch.com/playground/8df953a911df4a98bd365841eb55046f#377051

need your feedback