Tiger 1 Tank

raulgarcia3D

Made in my free time to improve texturing skills and modelling skills. Made in 16K resolution with 4 different textures each one at 4K resolution. Feedback would be awesome as I am looking to improve my work everyday!
Regards.

PBrain

Your modeling looks really solid! I would recommend working on the texturing a bit. The metal texture looks a bit big, maybe make it tile a little smaller. I really like the mud detail on the treads, but I think there should be more mud on the bottom of the tank too. You're on the right track! 

CybranM

Its a bit hard to tell on the texture sheet you posted but I appears that you have unique textures for all the roadwheels and tread links.
I think you could have gotten away with instancing most of them to save texture space.
Textures look a bit bland to be honest and it looks like youve applied a generic dirt material on the entire tank. It doesn't look like metal or zimmerit which is a bit weird. The scratches on the exhaust covers looks too deep since the covers are of relatively thin metal the damage would have torn the metal.

Its a good start though, the shape is good and with some work the textures can become pretty good as well

raulgarcia3D

@PBrain
Thanks for that feedback man! I will work on those details you mentioned, when I spend weeks on a project I just get a bit blind and make some mistakes hehe. Ill post some updates when I get some stuff done! Thanks man, really aprecciate your time 

raulgarcia3D

@CybranM
(I will post down below some textures so you are able to see more in detail)
Thanks for that awesome feedback really.  I do not usually get responses as deep as yours so I am really grateful Cybran.
The wheels UV's are instances, it would have been crazy to make them one by one, it's just that I have moved some elements to get more resolution on the UV Map.  I will take that feedback and see how it looks, the tank has a material on it, but as you said it looks really generic and not detailed. I will work on that. Thanks for your time man! Aprecciate it lots. 

UV MAP

ALBEDO (Without Ambient Occlusion)

Ambient Occlusion

Mikevshero

Looking good man, really like the modelling and detail you have included on the tracks I agree that the normals on the scratches/dents are a bit too strong, and they are a little big as well, so would try toning them down a bit and maybe add some silver to give the impression that its scratched the paint off. keep it up