The design admittedly doesn't seem apparent. I have no idea what the "culture" of the gate is, or what it's a gate for etc, and it's not being communicated by the work itself. If you have to write out the explanation, than that would mean to me the design has failed the asset's communicative ability.
I don't think you're done with this, but without seeing concept art or a render target, we have no idea what you're trying to do.
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The design admittedly doesn't seem apparent. I have no idea what the "culture" of the gate is, or what it's a gate for etc, and it's not being communicated by the work itself. If you have to write out the explanation, than that would mean to me the design has failed the asset's communicative ability.
I don't think you're done with this, but without seeing concept art or a render target, we have no idea what you're trying to do.