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Dezmond polycounter lvl 3
Long time listener, First time caller.
For my first polycount thread I got Music Store by Jorge Gonzalez
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/JgX4a



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Modeling in Blender. Used Adobe Fuse to create the base of the people.



I'm open to critique and suggestions.
How would this look best on my portfolio? I'm trying to break into the industry.

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  • Takezo
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    Takezo null
    I like where you're at right now.
    Have you tried shifting the camera off-center/angling the shot a bit more from the side?
    Also, I think the scene needs a lot more modeled detail in places where you have textures suggesting them right now, but I'm sure you've got that covered.
    Maybe toning down the lights(intensity) on the ceiling and adding a hint of environment fog for some faint godrays coming from the windows would add to the overall atmo.

    Cheers!
  • Dezmond
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    Dezmond polycounter lvl 3
    @Takezo
    Cool. Thank you for all the feedback. Fog sounds like a great idea. I actually can't wait o see how it looks.
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