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Ball action- Respawn Animbreak challenge

AnthonyAnimation
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Hey guys! Here's my WIP shot for this month's Animbreak challenge. It's still rough in some areas, but I wanted to try and get at least some feedback as there's only 3 days left! Consider this in Blocking/Blocking-plus area. I'll take feedback on anything (readability, posing, camera, timing, etc.)  just know there will be adjustments all around. Thanks!

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/164145#201032
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  • AGoodFella
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    AGoodFella polycounter lvl 5
    Nice, lots of interesting stuff going on.

    One thing that stood out to me was the part at f234 feels a bit abrupt as the ball changes direction and shoots off to around the pipe.
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  • HeyGafilimore
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    Very cool idea! I'm getting a Rube Goldberg feel from this respawn which is a neat idea. I agree with AGoodFella though, that is a really quick directional change to get him on that ramp. If you have your heart set on using that ramp, maybe put an obstacle there that forces the ball to go around. I'm thinking like a mini-golf course. Just an idea though.

    Excited to see how this turns out, good luck!
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