I figured I should upload my old college application essays I sent to Common Appplication and USC as reference for others to use. Out of the universities I applied to, I went to USC for their Interactive Media, Games, and Design program in the School of Cinematic Arts for a Bachelor's in Art.
My essays went through numerous revisions and edits through highschool teachers, tutors, and other mentors.
I remark that my situation involved a lot of afterschool tutoring, rigorous focus on nailing standardized testing, and going to a highschool that has been consistently listed nationally on "Best Highschool Lists' in Newsweek, etc (Whitney High).
If you are in need of examples of application essays, feel free to look at mine.https://www.dropbox.com/sh/bzmssuhsh5ap7fj/AADGWMGFcwdFrYUTmlJFGjxUa?dl=0