So yeah, this project I actually intend to finish. Wanted to do something Interior and Exterior at the same, mixing it with foliage and rocks. I never did this before but I do intend to finish this.
Please let me know what you think ! I'd love to get some critiques and advice !
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UPDATE : July 6
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Doing the exterior in a few days after I finish all the interior.
Let me know what you think !
Dont mind the bedsheet, it looks like sheet. I'm re-doing it.
Doing the sheets now.
Played Firewatch? hehe
@mats effect I'm going to do that soon for my grunge pass. Firewatch is the reason im making this diorama LMAO, great game, great graphics.
Quick Update : Took a break from interior stuff, getting too mundane. Doing exterior stuff currently, focusing on landscaping, rocks and foliages. Interior looks almost the same from the last one. Landscape has a really low-res lightmap, gonna up-it-up soon.
What do you guys think ? What should I improve on ? Let me know below !
Nice attention to details, cool meshes
@cmc444 thanks man, ill keep this updated !
Exterior is working well. Shifted my direction to finishing interior and wrapping it up soon. Here's some stills. Would LOVE to get some feedback !
a couple of filler objects I made for the scene. More shit coming soon so stay tune. I'd love to get some feedback on these though.
More fillers, baking the scene ATM. Will post more interior stills soon.
Making trees is gonna be fun /s
What do you guys think ? I'D LOVE to get some critiques and feedback. Let me know what I should change, add, remove !
Cheers, thanks for checking this out.
- Added even more filler props, like chemical products, hygiene stuff.
- Added bags, towels, and a new bed sheet. I still hate it but it will do for now.
- Adjusted some LUT and Exposure, it was so blown out last time its ridiculous. Also added God Rays
- Developed the ceiling a bit more, flesh it out.
Can I ask which softwares are you using?
cheers man !
Think I'm done with the interiors, gonna move onto developing the exterior now.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fQCdGc8Yym0
Here's some more close ups.
Anyways. took a break and continued with developing the exterior. Been doing couple of foliages. Some pines and fir. Also working on more foliages, flowers, grasses and bushes. Will be posting soon.
First time doing foliage, still have tons of stuff to learn about it. Let me know what you think.
I made some quick measurements from one of your shot into the tower. Considering a desk is at 73-75cm (+ or -),; the shelf on top of the desk is at 250cm..which is too much for 99.9% people
Cheers, my 2 cents...
If I can be nitpicky, the white border on the windows seems too bold, like condensate from the cold, but the light and environment tell it's a warm spring day.
But yo thanks for the feedback, im gonna try to fix that now.
A big dark sky with lots of smoke and kind of a very orange tone to the hole area because of the fire
I mean why not right ?
@Frezno513 Thanks man, I really appreciate it. As for your question, you just gotta plan it out. Gather as MUCH reference as possible, list all objects (especially the filler ones) and most importantly, add story/narrative elements to the way you place those objects (really important)
Anyways, I took a long brake and I completely revamped the exterior scene. Doing the fillers ATM (logs, pale, axe, wires, pipes . . .) took care of the macro pieces first.
What do ya think ??
Also great job for dressing the outside too!