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Lost in the Void - Short Cinematic

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Hey, I finished my short cinematic involving a woman looking for her sister in a misty forest known for its ties to another realm of reality and during her search she finds her body hanging between the trees wrapped in rope. She steps back in horror to fall back into a doorway into a void realm. 

https://youtu.be/SUXRtUCu3tk

Any feedback on the animation and the setting are greatly appreciated. I am curious to know if the setting suits the theme of the story. How could I improve the animation to show more of the narrative?  I am basically looking for any feedback, to develop this idea further.

Cheers
Tom B.
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