Deadpool Entry animation

rocklee

hi .. 
I made this deadpool entry animation blocking using this wonderful deadpool rig ..
any suggestion are welcome  
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q2wxNkwHDg8&feature=youtu.be  

Arturow

I think it needs more frames between some actions but its going good!

- There is a "jump" in position when it lands , it goes a little to far to <---
-In the second lookout around :04 his arms are too symetrical , even his legs , it almost look like when the rig is imported to maya :P try to break that symetry

Good job!

rocklee

thanks man for your suggestion i will work on breaking symmetry    

rocklee

up date ......
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UZBNo1bdGcY&amp;feature=youtu.be

slipsius

Good start! I think the thing that stood out the most to me was the end where he pops back on screen. Because of his character, I think it would be better if only his body came back on screen, and his feet stayed off screen. It's not realistic in terms of balance, but for a comic character that constantly talks to the camera, it works very well. 

Alternatively, if you do try that and it looks too weird, you could try bringing him closer to frame so when he steps in, you`re only seeing his upper body. A close up shot of him staring at the camera. This is also very comic'y. Walks off screen, then all of a sudden is super close. 

If you dont like either of those, I would at the very least, bring his left foot (screen right) in closer to the edge of the screen. It definitely seems too far out. Like, stand up, and do the action he is doing. If you lean out like that, your foot tends to be under you. Right now it's under his shoulder, if not a bit further out. 

rocklee

thanks slipsius for your suggestion 
here is up date 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86P7nkhEwS0&amp;feature=youtu.be