I wondered if anyone would be kind enough to have a look at my portfolio and see what I need to improve and what pieces of work you think hurt my chances are getting a job within the industry. Tell me what you like or what you dislike, what works and what doesn't and what other pieces of work I can add to my portfolio to fill out my set of skills. Also if you can tell me what my work looks like to an employer if you were to hire me, to help me gain insight to how my work looks and is presented.
My portfolio: https://www.artstation.com/artist/silohx
Thank you! Any feedback would be much appreciated!