[Wip] Female Orc

Nimusho

This is a character I'm working on for a personal project. I'm still blocking out the anatomy and before I move onto armor and would like some C&C please...

Thanks


Face:


Full Body:

Maxilator

Good work so far, I think you should make the lips form around the teeth more, right now they don't really look like they go into the mouth.

Nimusho

Maxilator said:

Good work so far, I think you should make the lips form around the teeth more, right now they don't really look like they go into the mouth.

Thanks, I was trying to avoid having her bottom lip bulge out a lot, but the tusks do look a bit awkward just sitting on the corner of her mouth. 

Nimusho

Minor Update


Still pretty low poly, but I tried to make the tusks look like they were actually protruding from the lower lip/jaw not just "floating" there.

Nimusho

Another minor update, I've been pretty busy with work/school and haven't had much time to work on it. I adjusted the lips/tusks some more

X-One

Although you haven't fixed the lips yet, the tusks now look like they're closer to the right spot. I would try and place them where the canines should be positioned. (They look pretty pretty close now)

Nimusho

X-One said:

Although you haven't fixed the lips yet, the tusks now look like they're closer to the right spot. I would try and place them where the canines should be positioned. (They look pretty pretty close now)

Thanks, I'm trying to avoid having her lower lip/jaw protrude out too far, but I guess its going to be unavoidable. Especially if I want it to look right, if I want to animate the face.