Alcoholic Hobo Character

sugunwar

Looks like I done here





here is artstation page with different renders https://www.artstation.com/artwork/RgE3v




Hello ))

I try to do alcoholic hobo character
So here is basic forms



and then I split it by parts for details 


he must be king of alcoholic hobos




I'll appreciate critiques 

Thank you 

Zitch

The shoe currently feels a little odd. It feels more like a sock then a shoe because of the wrinkles.  Check out this image of a ripped she and get the "Shoe materiel feel" without it turning straight into cloth.

Brian "Panda" Choi

Revisit your cargo shorts and shoes are not obeying how those clothing items usually crate folds, creases, etc.

Focus on the mechanics of HOW the folds flow, originate, and terminate across the human body when worn.

sugunwar

I agree with you 

So here  updated version

Zitch said:

The shoe currently feels a little odd. It feels more like a sock then a shoe because of the wrinkles.  Check out this image of a ripped she and get the "Shoe materiel feel" without it turning straight into cloth

sugunwar

little update here

sugunwar

Little update, baking 

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Cloth textures 

slosh

This is looking pretty solid but I think his arms are way too thin.  I'm guessing you are going for a gaunt look but even still the way the sleeves look, it looks like he has twigs for arms.  I would give that a bit more thickness since you should also take into account the volume of the sleeve material and the fact that it's not skintight.

sugunwar

slosh said:

This is looking pretty solid but I think his arms are way too thin.  I'm guessing you are going for a gaunt look but even still the way the sleeves look, it looks like he has twigs for arms.  I would give that a bit more thickness since you should also take into account the volume of the sleeve material and the fact that it's not skintight.

I'll try to tweak it

And here is head texture base 

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update 

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Update 
Renders from marmoset 

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face and hair reshape