Gerat 06H Rifle High Poly Critique

OFPismySOP · Jul 2016

I'm working on a portfolio piece and I'd like some feedback on it before I move forward into the low poly area and start texturing.

It's a Gerat 06H from the end of World War 2. It's supposed to be made from two stamped pieces of metal that were welded together and it takes StG-44 magazines.

I really wanted to focus on the "stamped sheet metal" look and have some rough looking edges and tack welding as well.

Any feedback is welcome!

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Here's the reference images and some videos I used to make it as well.

https://youtu.be/WEPwmYcCPFs?t=8m42s

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sl2aOhQus0o