Why is there a single coke can sitting on the log ? If feels so out of place. - the ground texture feels very zoomed-in/noisy, maybe add another texture and blend the 2 together for a more of a variety - the shadows in the log texture is very black/harsh - the ground texture should not be showing in the fire pit (if it was used there would be coal/ash not healthy leaves) - the blue color of the tent doesn't match the scene ( - the wood is stacked too clean/nicely if it was abandoned for a long time - the scene doesn't feel abandoned - the objects should tell a story (is there plant life growing on top of stuff signifying it has been there for a long time, if the tent was abandoned the texture should be weathered/torn/damaged a bit - the coke cans are too clean if they were there for a long time - you should make the scene darker the further away from the focal point (the background should gradually fade to dark)
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- the ground texture feels very zoomed-in/noisy, maybe add another texture and blend the 2 together for a more of a variety
- the shadows in the log texture is very black/harsh
- the ground texture should not be showing in the fire pit (if it was used there would be coal/ash not healthy leaves)
- the blue color of the tent doesn't match the scene (
- the wood is stacked too clean/nicely if it was abandoned for a long time
- the scene doesn't feel abandoned - the objects should tell a story (is there plant life growing on top of stuff signifying it has been there for a long time, if the tent was abandoned the texture should be weathered/torn/damaged a bit
- the coke cans are too clean if they were there for a long time
- you should make the scene darker the further away from the focal point (the background should gradually fade to dark)