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MrKamikaze

So I'm on break from school for 3 week. right now I decided to give myself a big project. right now it's week 1(6/23/2015) but right now I'm getting the sculpting part done in zbrush. I want to post my progress on it but I want some critiques from my fellow 3d designers. I would really appreciate the help. Thanks. :thumbup:

Tobbo

Pics?

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the idea is a ff style bahamut but with a slave design to it more with more Greek/ Roman twist to it.

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I have the base to it right now

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Tobbo wrote: »

Pics?

I'm at the dorms and right before i was about to post, power went out. almost lost everything if it wasn't for quick save. lol

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skodone

i'd add some more variation to the feathers closer to the body, theyre looking very parallel

looks quite nice!!

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skodone wrote: »

i'd add some more variation to the feathers closer to the body, theyre looking very parallel

looks quite nice!!

Thanks, okay i gotcha. I'll rotate them a little bit and at some cuts. :thumbup:

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I need to fix the wing a little more just realize some more things. however, i did adjust them a tad

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RockSPb

Looks cool. but u need more uniform distribution of polygons.

MrKamikaze

thanks man, i'll get cleaning those poly. Glad you pointed that out:thumbup:

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Texture Work with no color

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I'm gonna go heady and clean the flow alittle, I'm also have to work on the smoothing groups still. I'll post the body with it's map on soon.

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i also have to fixes the texture