Dangerous Girl

Edgar T

Hi guys!

So much time looking you in the shadows, it's time to show you all something mine.

I found that concept and I felt like to model it in 3D. My intention is to give her a more occidental look, but mantaining the silouette and the spirit of her.



C&C are really wellcome. I will need your advices to straighten this thread in the right direction .

Hatsya

Occidental, or oriental? As in, Westernize her?

Edgar T

Hatsya, I try to give her an occidental touch. I say that because is a concept with a manga style... you know, looking for more realistic proportions and features. Hope I will achieve it

mr_ace

i think if you're still trying to go for the feel of the concept even with more realistic proportions, you need to make her more petite and small. your model currently looks very athletic and muscular and slightly masculine, wheras the concept is petite and cutesy. try and make the legs shorter, the shoulders narrower, head bigger, hands smaller and the make the muscles fairly undefined

The_Blenderer

Boobs look wrong and very silicon made, learn how real natural boobs are and the anatomy that underlie beneath them.

RMeeks

Something that may be helpful in the boob department: babelab!

Edgar T

Hey guys!!

Following your advices and comments, here's a bit fixed girl. I noticed that the hands now looks very bigs.. I will fix it soon... so...