GW1 necromancer (first character)

pear

hey, first character and first thread!:) i started making it after watching the 3d motive and hai phan's character modelling tutorials(great stuff!).i spent a week or 2 learning anatomy and now im trying to learn new modelling techniques in zbrush.

The necrotic armor from guild wars 1!



there's something wrong with the mouth i think



im working on the armor atm (fun times!)



spooky scary skeleton



So what do you guys think about it?

ftorek

she's much skinnier on your drafts (which i think suits the character well) - especially around hips and waist area - now she looks quite butch...

spooky scary bit looks cool

cheers
m.

pear

thanks! i changed the shape a little bit.

Popolo

Welcome to polycount

Before you continue with your character I think you want to look over your anatomy, I can see quite a lot of flaws that needs to be fixed before your continue with anymore details.
Before you continue try to look into some more anatomy studies or how other people's models look like.

Something that might be worth taking a look at is this page <- Not safe for work!

bigphun

Not a bad first effort, but your figure appears a bit flat. The abdominals could be pulled out a little to make the torso more cylindrical. The same is probably true for the sternum region.

Some quick adjustments to the face would be to push the corners of the mouth wayyy back and pull out the bridge of the nose. Those changes should round out the face a lot.

Athomield

Good work but there is something wrong going on the legs, knees are too skinny or the lower legs are overly musculated.

pear

thanks for the feedback , i changed the face a little bit and here's an update



sleep time!