Why is the wood reflecting blue? There was this widespread idea before people started to adopt pbr shaders that you need to reflect the inverted color of the diffuse in order to get neutral highlights, but it was always incredibly wrong. If this is what you've done you'll want to remove that and set the specular to a…
I think using zbrush/mudbox/xnormal to create normal maps will boost their visible effect, often when putting diffuse textures through normal map generators such as the Nvidia plugin (and NDO to a lesser extent) they don't not provide the same intensity as surface transfer techniques. I like the idea of the scene, so…
For starters your palm trees are too perfect, too green. The stems of the palms coming out of the base ion the real image have more yellow, and this doesn't stop anywhere. the yellowness continues throughout the palm, with some dead tips and broken palms. the real palm trees also have a lot of dead matter in their tops,…
nice shape language. Really consistent feel between the weapons, looking forward to seeing more. The procedural wear is too deep and evenly-covered on the Kranz cannon, hoping you choose another method for this next one. The stubby design theme is messing with the sense of scale for the Ion cannon. The platform, controls,…
Sorry for the over-excitement. I've kinda been waiting this game since 2006 . I see a lot of criticism on this game, especially on the character design but anyway, haters gonna... For the nostalgic people like me, you can simply watch how the game and character design evolved since 2006 when it was first planned for the…
Thanks! It's no problem. I don't mind talking about this stuff because there is a lot of misunderstanding on the topic these days; especially with the Tea Party trying to co-opt that particular movement. Pretty awesome how well Ron Paul did in Iowa -- I think it would be a glorious trainwreck if he ever made it to…
Mainly made some grammar and punctuation edits. Added more description at the front to better set the stage for the event (specifically clarify that the stage is outside, they are in Ionia, etc.). Adjusted the heartbeat to not use onomatopoeia and be more "Poe" like.
A True Performance The sun had
already long set in Ionia and yet, darkness was not. At the town square of a
small village, illuminated by lanterns and basked in the moon’s glow, rose a
stage. Nearly the whole village was gathered there to witness the infamous Hana troupe in action. Hana was a traveling troupe of…
I would cut your character, my opintion is that the amount of error the human eye is willing to accept in anatomy is much smaller than on building and props. This model just looks weird and unatural (since I'm not a character guy I can't say anything concrete about it, just my gut feeling). What I dislike most about all of…