if this is going to be a portfolio piece, i think its fine, but for something thats going somewhere i would want to make something more unique, this has too much of a district 9/mass effect Turian body type going on, its a body type and overall shape that has been overused as of late.
Let me be the first to "ROFL" at gir for posting DND manual for anatomy reference... hahaha. I want to kill you for that. I thought that after leaving turbine that would never happen again when i was working on a monster...orsomeone nearm e was. Please do not look at that drawing for anatomical reference. Thanks.
having intakes on the side and under the nose doesnt really help anything if the engines are on pylons. It would look more practical if the engines themselves were independent, and instead in the place of the missplaced turbines you could put weapons. Also the cockpit doesnt look very friendly for a pilot. Is it more than…