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  Ged interpolator

  Nov 2018

  nice work, looks good, the topology isn't wonderful but its certainly passable. you could have avoided all the pinching in the center of the mirror by having mostly quad polys that go across the mirror instead of to a point, that probably doesn't effect the final result but is neater work. The dirt around the edge of the mirror reads a bit heavy handed on the viewer but that could just be the viewer. Personally I think a few more pieces of this quality in your portfolio and you will be in a decent position to apply for jobs.
  

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  Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range

  Nov 2018

  Now make it actually reflect in a game engine like RDR2.
  
  Several edgeloops on the flat faces of the frame need to be removed as they do little to contribute to the silhouette.

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  Skov null

  Nov 2018

  Brian "Panda" Choi said:

  Now make it actually reflect in a game engine like RDR2.
  
  Several edgeloops on the flat faces of the frame need to be removed as they do little to contribute to the silhouette.

  I thought about those edgeloops as well. Also how would i put it into RDR2 im not familiar with that engine.
  

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  Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range

  Nov 2018

  Well, there are alternative free ones a lot of us are using at work and hobby stuff.
  
  Unreal and Unity to name a few.

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  Skov null

  Nov 2018

  Thanks i will try out unreal then I just thought by RDR2 you meant Red Dead Redemtion 2 and i definitely don't have that engine

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  Brian "Panda" Choi high dynamic range

  Nov 2018

  I could somewhat understand that confusion.  I forgot to make RDR2 a posessive RDR2's.

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  shabba polycounter lvl 16

  Nov 2018

  Is it gold trim? Maybe consider pbr for gold having black albedo+whatever you grunge on top. If its not, then disregard this

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  Ashervisalis grand marshal polycounter

  Nov 2018

  @shabba I'm curious why you're suggesting the gold part have a black albedo!
  

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  Skov null

  Nov 2018

  Ashervisalis said:

  @shabba I'm curious why you're suggesting the gold part have a black albedo!
  

  Yeah i am as well i could understand what you meant if it was vray or corona or something alike that kind of renderer, but otherwise im not sure what you mean. @shabba
  

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  Skov null

  Nov 2018

  Im starting to make a bunch of other models as well to make a whole house. Does this effect work
  

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  Ged interpolator

  Nov 2018

  Hey nice idea making a house, What effect do you mean? the worn fabric or the white dusty stuff? Id recommend just comparing it to some reference, 

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  Skov null

  Nov 2018

  yeah the fabric and dust effect. I kinda did a full house now xD gonna work on it a bit more though

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  Skov null

  Nov 2018

  Btw BriBrian "Panda" Choi said:

  Now make it actually reflect in a game engine like RDR2.
  

  This is a screengrab from unreal engine

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